Charlotte, your work is good and your blog gives evidence of how hard you have worked on it. Well done. There are a few things that you could do to improve: a) always use LIIAR to produce more in-depth analyses of existing products and to evaluate your own work b) use more terminology in your evaluation of your work. c) include more evidence of the planning process e.g. (drafts of your cover as you go along). Work consistently on your next project in order to achieve an improved grade.
Charlotte, your work is good and your blog gives evidence of how hard you have worked on it. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThere are a few things that you could do to improve:
a) always use LIIAR to produce more in-depth analyses of existing products and to evaluate your own work
b) use more terminology in your evaluation of your work.
c) include more evidence of the planning process e.g. (drafts of your cover as you go along).
Work consistently on your next project in order to achieve an improved grade.